Why Daddy?

Hey Daddy?

Remember when you, mommy and me would play together. I do. But one day mommy left and that made you really sad. You started drinking this weird stuff that mad you sleepy. One day you drank too much and it made you angry, and you hit me. The next day I drew you, mommy, and me hoping it would make you feel better, but it didn’t. You yelled at me and ripped the picture up, but I didn’t cry if it made you happy then I would be happy. The next day you came home really mad and you were holding a knife. I got scared so I ran to my room and hid in my closet, but you found me. I begged you not to do it daddy but you didn’t listen. You cut my throat daddy, even though I screamed at you, you did it.

Why daddy? I just wanted us to be a family again.

  • Jesus Regis

    Omg! What did this dad drink?!?! And what gave him the idea to murder his son?!?!

    • momo

      ah..
      you see his son was only 5 so he didn’t understand the concept of beer and alcohol
      after his mother left his father became an alcoholic
      one day he drank a little too much.

      Also Isaac (the name of the child) was getting on his fathers nerves
      therefor his father decided to end the boys life
      (btw im TheNightmareMaker haha)

  • Puddin Tane

    That seemed kind if quick. Try drawing it out just a bit more. 3 stars.

    • momo

      haha noted

  • JaneTheReader

    Lovely short story! I understand some prefer longer stories, but I think it requires skill to write a good horror story in a small paragraph. 👏

    • momo

      oml thank you so much
      you see this is my very first story
      so it’s really amazing when people say such kind things about this one
      and i will try to make more horror stories along the way haha

      • JaneTheReader

        Your first story? I’m impressed! I can’t wait to read more from you keep up the good work! 👍(5 stars)

        • momo

          haha thank you
          i also can’t wait to see more of your kind comments on my stories

          • JaneTheReader

            Of course, of course. I will be there!