Liu Woods Story

12.1k

4.36

I see you came here to know more about me. Well, have a seat and we can talk now. My name is Liu Andrew Woods, I am 16 years old.

When I was younger, me and my younger brother Jeffrey Alan Woods, were very close. Until one day, our dad got a promotion at work so we had to move to a new neighborhood that changed our lives. Jeffrey became more quiet and more distance yet I always stayed by his side even though our parents sometimes argue.

But on the first day of school, we were heading to the bus stop waiting these three kids; Randy, Keith and Troy came up to us saying that new people have to pay a toll to ride the bus.

So they stole my wallet out of my pocket.

Then I saw Jeff beating them up. My eyes were widen. After I grabbed my wallet, we ran back to our house hearing the police coming as soon as we got to the house.

After the police got to the house, I didn’t want my younger brother to go Juvie so I told the police that “it was me” and got into the car even though I was hearing Jeffrey wanting me to tell the police that it was him. I just wanted to protect him cause that’s what older brothers do anyway.

After I was released from Juvie, I went to the hospital with my parents to see Jeffrey again. When I saw that his face and hair had changed, my eyes widen. After we got home he started to act different he wasn’t normal anymore. There was something in his eyes I couldn’t tell.

So that night I sleeping yet when I woke up. He was on top of me. The eyelids had been burned off his eyes and he had craved a smile into his cheeks. That’s all I saw, feeling the knife stabbing me. My eyes closed and I stopped breathing, thinking that I was gonna die, yet I didn’t.

I woke up again noticing that I’m in a hospital bed recovering. So now, I wander the streets searching for him even though I sometimes wear a mask to hide the scars on my face and a scarf to cover the scar that wraps around my neck. Now you know my story of what happened to me and my brother. Now if you excuse me I must go and continue my search.

This article written by Akira Spears

Creepypasta.xyz

Creepypasta queen
Jane and you want to kill him why Jeff why
Haley McLean
Because he can
Eyeless Jack
Lol
Angel Alfaro
Can I join the conversation
Vuck Fanny
Story was okay,nothing great but nothing horrible either 🙂
You do need to work on your grammar a bit tho..Have fun practising
- Edz
  Practicing lol i hate when people correct people on how to spell and they cant even spell to funny lol
Edz
Lmao hey mr internet warrior no ones b*tt hurt but you
Edz
1. This aint my story
2. Keep telling yourself you ment to spell that way when you no you didn’t and we no you didn’t
3. Internet warrior need an icicle for that b*tt hurt?
4. Your mom’s calling you.
Giulia
It’s too short. You could have written a better story.
Swotsy
Poorly written, your grammatical errors are glaring and obvious. Learn about present and past tense. 😉
Daniel Di Benedetto
Awful writing. You have zero ability to describe a scene. This was essentially you hinting at events that have no significance to the reader, as they’re not even relatively built up enough to matter. I’ve found more literary depth in a grocery list.
snow crystal
Um… This is basically just a lame and less detailed version of jeff the killer. I love the idea of showing the story through the brother’s perspective, but it would have been waaay more interesting if you made it seem like his perspective was different. You should have told what happened while he was taken away. Also i could just be stupid, but when it says he is searching for jeff, he never said why. Is he searching for him to finally be reunited again? To try and fix him? To join him? Or to kill him? Idk… Its not that i didnt like it. I just feel like anybody could have made this exact story. Its just not very NEW or DIFFERENT or UNPREDICTABLE ..but yeah good job coming up with the idea of a different perspective.
Jed
1/5 Another schlocky backstory written by Akira Spears adds nearly nothing new to the character of Liu from the already abominable ‘Jeff the Killer’.
Kara Nohrenberg
Liu I am sorry that happen
Kara Nohrenberg
hi Liu
Angel Millsap
So I want jeff the killer to kill me how do i get a hold of him?
Taryn Rehfeld
Okay this is gonna be long. First of all… Grammer issues. I get it once in a while, but this was like every other word. AND there is so much info wrong. Jeff is the older brother he’s just shorter than Liu, and there middle names are Vicki and (I’m not sure if this one was right but) Alan, and Liu does NOT want to kill Jeff because he would be “just as bad…” There for would not kill him, consult Google or at least a well made fan made story! (I might sound a little like a fan girl here but, oh well.) You could at least attempt to add in other people than Jane everlasting, like make a back story for Tim/masky and Brian/hoodie, put BEN drown in as a friend or even try to add eyeless Jack, anything to differentiate for the fan girls. Honesty I think you should re-read this than re-write, because you have good intentions and ideas for story’s just you didn’t know how to carry them out. In conclusion, I think I put more effort into this comment then you did into the story and the only thing I like about this post is the picture on the thumb nail.
(But good luck in the future! ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤)
HayHay
Who should I hug?? Jeff or Liu???
Aleisha Stock
“my eyes were widen” oh ok

Facebook

Read more: